Woozey the Writer

Thank you both so much for your reviews! :) I've been told about too much telling before, but nobody has ever actually bothered to explain to me the difference. I ...

**Author's Note: This is a later part of the novel, so the backstory to some of the character's mentioned have already been explained. Any queries though, please feel free to ...

Hi :) Thank you for you rcomment and taking the time to read my work. Yes, what happens to James is explained further on, Just wondering what you meant by ...

*Please note: this is not a finished novel. Nor is it a typical romance story. It is more of a draught that I have become stuck on. Could you comment ...

Hey. This was a good read. I found the secret message clever and entertaining. The poem itself flowed well until certain points (which have already been pointed out.) Try to ...

Tina Pian smiled. She couldn’t help it. Everything was just so. Happy and perfect, the satisfaction temporarily easing her aching joints. The room was flickering as the flames danced in ...

Hi. I have just one thing to say about your poem-Wow! It was beautifully written and gives a deliciously dark twist on the much-loved, if a little worn out, classic. ...

The small child glanced nervously at the blank sheet of paper in front of him. He studied it cautiously. It scared him a little-the possibilities. The potential. In the wrong ...

hi. I am now going to try and write you a review, but, don't worry, it's only due to the ratios. Your poem was...interesting! It was good, no doubt, but ...

I loved your poem! :) It was very interesting. I knew what the subject was originally, so it made me smile. I particulary liked your reference to 'Toms' and 'Jerry'. ...

Hi. I really love your poem :) It was a little confusing at the start but, in the end, it was clear. I think you should change the last line ...

Hi. I liked your poem. It rings true to the life of a 'geek' and I love the title! It's inticing! Now I'm in a bit of a catch 22 ...

Hi. Your poem was beautiful! It reminds me exactly how I felt when me and my boyfriend were going through a rough patch. Was it based on you? You need ...

yes please...i need points for improvment! glad you liked it though. part 3 is in process! x

Hi. I thought your poem was good! It reminded me of how I feel during Maths (which is 6th period today! :-() and Not a graze on her steely frame ...